Writing me Down

Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Haiku - from the bird table

Blackbird grabs bread chunk -
places it beneath her feet -
Gone! Cheeky sparrow.


flash of gold and green
a feathered whirling combat
over sunflower seeds


At 5:23 pm, Anonymous Beth said...

I like the first one, a lot. I can see that sparrow whipping in and grabbing the booty.

At 9:22 pm, Blogger Carole said...

Thank you!

Just realised I accidentally enabled comment moderation on this blog. Whoops! All fixed now.


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